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the second piece from the sequence "m a s k".. i want to thank for his incredible support and inspiration... i wrote a description in "m a s k 1 wearing" if you wanna hera more... but now, i wanna hear from you... please help me improve this sequence.. it is very dear to me...

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:icondobbler:
What can I say? This is AWESOME and that's not a word I use often. Really I can't find anything I'd change about it. Your exposures are perfect and it feels really natural. You're a great model, very believable poses and sense of animation.

Totally blown away by this...

You rock.

Hug

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A closed mouth gathers no feet...

I got prints - want one?
:iconmr-pancakes:
Oooh, even better! You definitely need to see this in full view to feel the full impact.

There are two or three small, small areas I noted where the lines are a bit unnatural, and maybe a gaussian blur, or blur of even 20% might help... I'm sure you could spot them, but in particular: Your hair, between the one of you in the orange shirt, and the green shirt. And, your hair and bridge of your nose between the two of you in the blue plaid shirts.

But this is still extremely fastidious. :) (Smile) Always a pleasure to view your work. Giggle I need to try something like this, if only I could get my self-timer to work. *hits camera* grr...

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Rose tints my world and keeps me safe my trouble and pain... :rose:
:iconboshi:
Ho. Ly. Crap. Having just come off from coming on another of your "mask" pieces, I find this one and my awe is just expontentially increased, if only by the magnitude of this one alone.

All different personas of yours, all expressed simultaneously. And it's so clearly expressed. If I could make a suggestion though, I feel that instead of having you standing shocked at the doorway at beholding this, that she'd be in the corner perhaps masterminding or even being overwhelmed by them all. The idea behind that being, since it seems that she's the "main face", so to speak, that she'd be aware of them at all times, but they'd either be subordinate to her or be almost intimidating.

Just a thought, though. And of course, either way it doesn't detract from this being a magnificent piece. I have to favourite this, and I do so in sheer admiration.

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"This rudderless world is not shaped by vague metaphysical forces. It is not God who kills the children. Not fate that butchers them or destiny that feeds them to the dogs. It's us. Only us." - Rorschach, The Watchmen
:iconmissarmani:
wow...thats so brilliant and creative =) (Smile)
I luved the idea
but whats up with the sleeping girl shoulder? its cropped sweety
:iconopcd:
this is awesome!
you see these kinda things more but this is just awesome..
great to see different outfits (that look very cool btw :) (Smile) ), just some different shoes would be handy
and maybe do your hair different too once and a while..
that would really confuse us!

but besides those little things, this is an awesome shot!
Thumbs Up

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my prints - my lomos - my website
:iconopcd:
crap, forget the hair thingy Blush

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my prints - my lomos - my website
:iconofrainandpurity:
My god...I am utterly speechless...

Not only do you possess the beauty of a Goddess, but the flawless power and talent of one as well.

That's it, I'm never taking another picture again...this is just...wow...

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Koham ciebie babe...:blowkiss:

:iconduchessofnod: :iconrazor6nails: :iconicyangel: :iconjayanne:
:iconxxxemotionalkid:
Jawdrop i have no words. i love this. just love it. :) (Smile) great idea and wonderful final product.

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And you find yourself on a velvet couch tasting the skin of a foreign girl. Her eyes are black and wet like oil and she ties your hands with a string of pearls.
:icondevilicious:
assuming this is all you - its an amazing piece - but i don't get how it fits in the mask series...Shrug .......



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**art requires an open mind**

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May 25, 2003
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May 21, 2003, 6:15:49 PM

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